Farah Ilyas

Rookie - 12 Points (10 12 1987 / Faisalabad, Pakistan)

What Her Right? ? ? Poem by Farah Ilyas


Her beauty i describe,
i lack words but i want use words right snow
when it falls on her face
i cant descriminate which one is white....
her deep shiny eyes having
shine of sunshine make me
believe that every thing is alright
bbehold she is coming one
stand for her this is what
she deserves
and
this what is her right

Submitted: Tuesday, May 10, 2011
Edited: Tuesday, May 10, 2011

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  • Gold Star - 9,741 Points Heather Wilkins (8/5/2013 4:10:00 PM)

    and this is what she deserves. well written. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (6/17/2013 9:07:00 AM)

    Same as yours I will say with humility. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (6/7/2013 6:52:00 PM)

    How can I describe her beauty
    Lacking words, snow falling on her face
    Which one the whitest
    Her deep shinning eyes of sunshine
    Tells my heart all will be alright
    Behold she is the coming one
    Standing for her so deserving
    She has earned her right (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Hribhu Dey (5/11/2011 7:08:00 AM)

    dear farah u write nicely..u sent me message..i failed to rply from my inbox...
    Plz read my poem INTROSPECTION thanks (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Mohammad Akmal Nazir (5/10/2011 5:31:00 AM)

    I like it. You have described it very well. Vivid imagery and remarkable style. Great write. I rate it 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem. (Report) Reply

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