Teresa Dearing

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Hallowed Hills - Poem by Teresa Dearing

Walk softly ‘cross these hallowed hills,
Wake not the spirits of dark chills.
As night falls ‘cross these harvest fields,
Where corn and soy, gave up their yields.
Fog now sends out her drifting hand,
To touch and chill the lowly man.
Light now a shrouded silver mist,
The moon griped in its mighty fist.
For in this land the ancient sleep,
Secrets kept the mysteries deep.

Walk softly ‘cross this hallowed keep,
Lest those spirits seek your soul to reap.


Comments about Hallowed Hills by Teresa Dearing

  • Gold Star - 5,767 Points Tiku . (7/15/2015 9:59:00 PM)

    Sever runs down the spine.Nice drop. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 40,859 Points Chinedu Dike (7/15/2015 9:00:00 AM)

    Lovely piece of poetry elegantly penned in poetic diction with lovely rhyme scheme. A beautiful poem written with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,819 Points Kim Barney (7/15/2015 7:46:00 AM)

    I see that you submitted this poem in 2007 and edited it in 2011. It needs another edit in 2015.
    I'm sure you meant
    The moon gripped in its mighty fist
    instead of
    The moon griped in its mighty fist.

    Congratulations on having it selected as Member Poem of the Day. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,060 Points Kenneth Maswabi (7/15/2015 7:20:00 AM)

    This is a beautiful poem.I like it.Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,738 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (7/15/2015 4:26:00 AM)

    It's a nice poem...I can imagine you walking through those hallowed hills cautiously. Which place is it? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 2, 2007

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 21, 2011


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