friends hanging out
drunk people driving
cars on high speed
big crash came by
so much pain
major injury
blood all over the place
so much lost
they are still there
I can see them
I cannot feel them
I cannot move them
like if they were not connected to the rest of the body
but they are still attatched
and I can see them
even thow they won't obey me
I put them in place
but I cannot feel them
I want to stand up
but they won't move
these hanging limbs
useless
just hanging from my body
carried by the wheelchair
friends say everything is going to be OK
thank god I cannot feel all of it
paraplegic legs feel nothing
but the pain is unbearable
Sabrina You have described the accident very simply. Don't lose your courage Rgds Noor
I am sorry about you tragedy, writing poetry is the best therapy. Thank you for sharing your story. Buena suerte! Good luck! HL
It's painful.... Feeling not pain is simply very painful, but how easily you have described it.
A very touching piece. I cannot imagine this. Therefore, I hesitate to speak. The poet, has spoken for me. GW62
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hope you are doing fine. You wrote this poem about 5 and a half years ago. I do not know how your condition is now, but your poem saddened me so much that I thought I would inquire from you about your present condition. The title is apt, the poem is truth, hence a beauty.