I have purchased a portrait
A beautiful woman‘s picture was there.
For once I thought I know her
But then felt otherwise
I could not remember perfectly.
But was feeling a pain deep inside my heart
I saw the picture whole night.
The picture’s lady hypnotized me.
She was saying something, but she can’t.
Her sparking eye’s says “kiss me”.
My subconscious mind, did not allow me.
Then I felt deep sleep.
In the morning, I opened my eye lids
Then I saw the picture.
But alas! There was no picture.
The portrait was blank.
There was small blood spot,
In the middle of the portrait.
And was written “Happy Birthday”
Dear subham this is so nice poem it seems that it is dedicated for some one lovely nice at all luwi
interesting lyric surrealistic poem, Subham, a true enigma.Thank you for sharing.....10++++
You said Rabindranath is your favourite poet. In one of his writings Tagore wrote 'Eto Rakto Keno' (Why so much of blood strains......) Could you recollect? Can you define me brother why 'There was small blood spot' in such a beautiful imagery?
wow! i am amazed by this poem very very nice and it jus touches me so much… i give u 10 stars! ! keep up with the good work! ! beautiful gift.. hazem al...
'Happy Birthday' a beautiful birthday gift! thanks for sharing.
Fantastic finale! ! Nice poetic-paradigm-shift. I’d have finished it with, ‘……… ‘ You guess please. Ten+++ dr.sakti
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I think, this poem is attached to some personal feelings which are difficult for outsiders to connect with. I liked your thought process except that blood spot.This spot contradicts the lover's image....good wishes...