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HATRED

Heavy hangs this drunken curse
Assuring Man’s demise.
Take him down by doleful hearse
Reflect now as he lies,
Educate before ‘tis worse,
Decree that love must rise.


Copyright © Mark R Slaughter 2009

Submitted: Tuesday, March 31, 2009
Edited: Wednesday, May 11, 2011


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  • Paige S (4/14/2009 11:32:00 AM)

    Each one of these lines is so powerful! ! Splendind work Mr. Slaughter! ! 10++! ! !

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (4/13/2009 8:47:00 AM)

    Yep, great work Mark, strong lines that say it all 10+

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  • Dr Hitesh Sheth (4/5/2009 8:32:00 AM)

    Here you are a champion of acrostic..............Good Write.........Still i like your humorous poems most..........

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  • Fiona Davidson (3/31/2009 4:36:00 PM)

    Excellent acrostic Mark....I love the challange in making poetry from a word...10+++

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