He Is Coming Back Poem by Abdallah Gamal

He Is Coming Back

Rating: 4.8


someday, somewhere, he will come
he will come to renew my life again
to tell me the story of every night
to play with me, to sing with me
haaaaahooooooohaaaheeeee
to push me while I riding my bike
to raise me up when I success
to stand behind the door,
watching me pray for him
to wipe my tears
to kill my fears
to share my dreams
to draw a picture for him and me,
The sun behind us, the tree above us
then I woke up. Oh I was lying beneath the stars
is this was real, , or I was just in a dream
Oh oh oh no, , it wasn't just a dream
It's a prediction that he is coming to share my dreams

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 14 July 2011

Nice poem written well with vivid imagery. A 10. TFS.

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Santosh Sharma 18 July 2011

A nice write with good imagination and thoght, as per your age you have displayed very good maturity, nice one keep writing.

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C.R. Clark 19 July 2011

Dreams can often be influential in ones life, even to encourage hope in a positive outcome in a future event. A very fine and descriptive write my friend. Thanks Richard

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Liliana Roman 17 November 2011

10 plus, all the way!

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Jessie Hopkins 16 November 2011

I'm running out of words to praise you with. Here's a traditional one but no less meaningful: Keep it up! :)

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Katelin Offord Harper 25 July 2011

wow this poem is amazing

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Sa'milleah Toatley 25 July 2011

the sky is the limit with this one it makes you think in dept

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Indira Babbellapati 20 July 2011

dreams breathe life into one's desires!

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