Kasi Navadomskis

Rookie (October 18,1990 / United States)

heartache and break


heartache and heartbroken..you took me in
and made me yours. it ook me awhile
but i eventually fell in. your eyes showed sympathy
your words gave comfort, your heart showed love
until i found out the truth of what you've been doing
the whole time you were gone.

Submitted: Monday, January 28, 2008

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Carol-Anne Spalding (7/31/2009 10:44:00 PM)

    very well written, expressed and communicated; one in which, I too, can relate; such heartache; we open our hearts carefully all the while guarded; then when we lower the protective wall, what we see, is not what we thought....and that is a heartache beyond words.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carissa Mcbride (9/26/2008 10:24:00 AM)

    if you open your heart it will likely break.

    -BLEEDING MASCARA (Report) Reply

  • Rookie LaNka Fateye (3/3/2008 1:08:00 PM)

    he made u trust him, but dan broked it down, , , later on in life, u'll realize it would b a pain to trust anothe person.... sayin from experience...... but if u'll have a long period relationship. the trust wil slowly apear.. ;) (Report) Reply

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