Heartbroken Poem by Lilith Tuchenhagen

Heartbroken

Rating: 5.0


I gave you all my love,
You gave me yours
I claimed you mine,
And you claimed me yours
You were once with a woman,
Who accused you
You came to me,
And made me happy
You said you love me,
And I believed you
you said you will never hurt me,
And I trusted you

I went to check my letters,
And what do I find?
I find a letter of hurt from you
I ran to our meeting spot in tears,
Finding you not there
I felt betrayal
I felt pain
I felt loneliness once again

I gave you my heart,
And you give yours to the one
You were once with

You said we will be together,
For ever and ever
That was just a lie

I gave you my love,
And you give yours,
to someone else

You came to my house that day,
Finding me in my bedroom alone
With my face buried in a pillow,
You say you never wanted to give me up
But what did you do? ,
You go back to the slu-,
No, I'm not gonna say it
You go back to the accuser
The cheater
The liar

You still give me the attention,
You show me your love
You smother me with your kisses,
But I will never feel that special connection
Ever again

You say we're still together,
But I don't believe you
You say you love me,
But I don't trust you
I can not forgive you,
Even if we shall get married
I am hurt by your actions,
I am torn
My heart was shredded to pieces,
By you, the one I loved

I am upset,
My depression is taking over
You see me with knives to my wrist,
But why won't you let me drag it across? ,
Do you really love me?
Do you honestly care? ,
Then why did you leave?
Why did you go to the one I hate,
The one a despise most?

I am heartbroken,
And I will always be
I will still live in pain,
Once again
Just because of your stupidness,
I wont forgive you
For I will always be heartbroken,
By you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chaths Odion 28 July 2011

1 word - Passion...you have a very deep vision towards life and it'll take you a long way.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 10 July 2011

Marvellous poem written with great skill. Rich in imagery and emotions. I liked and rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 1.

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Sidra Naz 10 July 2011

that is so beautiful lili.. u r so young but ur writing is strong.. i liked it.. :)

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