Oscar Robles

Rookie - 54 Points (Arizona)

Hello - Poem by Oscar Robles

Hello Sweet Woman you etched my Heart,
With a vision of you that has fallen apart
A Love so desired so greatly by us,
But the feelings of one that came to untrust
The scent of your hair lingering in my mind,
Teasing my soul but only to find
An emptiness so deep but a calming so strong,
Two loving Hearts blindly went wrong
My Heart yearns for you,
Yet it wishes you the best
For I had the chance
Yet failed Gods test.


Comments about Hello by Oscar Robles

  • Gold Star - 35,936 Points Chinedu Dike (9/11/2014 9:00:00 AM)

    Two loving hearts blindly went wrong. Lovely expression. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 16, 2014



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