Oscar Robles

Rookie - 54 Points (Arizona)

I Do - Poem by Oscar Robles

Remember that time when we first met
I do, I’ll never forget
Remember that time one day at the park
I do, we talked until dark
Remember that time I saw you in your truck
I do, got your number, just my luck
Remember when you first came to my house
I do, we stared in silence quiet as a mouse
Remember the first time we kissed
I do, a feeling today I deeply miss
Remember the first time we made love
I do, my Angel sent from up above
Remember our first fight
I do, I cried in silence late at night
Remember when you told me to leave
I do, to this day my Heart grieves
Remember you said you Hated me
I do, along with degrading me
Remember you had to have another man
I do, it crushed my Heart
Remember we tried and got back together
I do, but the thoughts and pictures are in me forever
Remember when I begged in Sorrow
I do, you turned your back
Remember when you packed my things
I do, still wonder what you did with the rings
Remember when I left that one last time
I do, Not a tear fell and you were Happy.

© Oscar Robles

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Comments about I Do by Oscar Robles

  • Veteran Poet - 1,129 Points Elia Michael (12/22/2013 11:52:00 AM)

    I loved this - it's form is original and I like the heartfelt sentiments and the way you ask remember...... _ it is my kind of poem, -well done! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (6/28/2013 6:07:00 PM)

    very sad write. sometimes things are just not meant to be. a good read (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 3, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, July 1, 2013

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