Her Love Song Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Her Love Song

Rating: 5.0


I will hold your hands in mine
Will rest my head on your shoulder
And will walk along summer beach

I will hold your hands in mine
Will rest my head on your shoulder
And will sit beside the winter fire

I will hold your hands in mine
Will rest my head on your shoulder
And will watch the pouring shower

I will hold your hands in mine
Will rest my head on your shoulder
And will slip into sleep every night

I will leave your hands from mine
Will move head from your shoulder
And will wait for you to reach stars

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prince Obed de la Cruz 30 December 2009

very well written... i was wandering, is this a free verse? ... but whether it is or not, it's still good.

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Marieta Maglas 30 December 2009

nice repetition I will hold your hands in mine Will rest my head on your shoulder wonderful lyric poem 10+++++++++

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Rajaram Ramachandran 30 December 2009

This is like a love song more musical to be sung.

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Joseph Poewhit 30 December 2009

Much love in simple things.

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Seamus O Brian 19 June 2015

Sometimes the beauty is in what you can't see. Enjoyed this!

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Walterrean Salley 03 January 2010

This is a beautiful poem. Love it.

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Eyan Desir 31 December 2009

Nice poem I didnt like the repeat but you did a fair job..10

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Louis Rams 30 December 2009

glad you held the hand for the stars are hard to reach.

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Janell Cressman 30 December 2009

very awesome poem! ! ! ! ! (10 from me)

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