Here Poem by Deborah Cromer

Here

Rating: 4.0


Nowhere I can go, not any place I can hide
This loneliness surrounds me and grows from inside
Silence screams out at me, I am so alone
Releasing deep pain that hurts me to the bone
I look around and wonder why you are not here
Holding you close to my heart, keeping you so very near
Gone and away, I can only miss you, miss you so much
The rest of my life lived without your loving touch
I miss you, so much so, my heart is dying
Holding my breath, I try to stop myself from crying
My brain and my mind, they work together as one
Remembering all and playing pictures of what we have done
Our time together was magic, such a glorious gift
One kiss from you always gave my spirit a lift
Now that you are gone, what will I do?
Can I go on, is there happiness for me without you?
The sun will still rise and the stars will still shine
Life goes on, although it walks a very fine line

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Almedia Knight-Oliver 17 August 2009

the title drew me 'Here'-first I want to say thanks for your comment on 'A Mother's Choice'.The words to poem rubs and irritates my heart-but the tone of the poem soothes at end.I look around and wonder why you are not 'Here' [ but] life goes on although it walks a very fine line' I could feel the tone of every word to this poem, the structure gently handled your words keeping them, moving flowing to the last word in the poem! a 10

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Nikunj Sharma 16 July 2009

after you are gone the world's gonna be alone a fine line it shall tread too donno what it shall do without YOU

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Nikunj Sharma 09 July 2009

Zindagi migzara...life goes on..I agree w u...ur peoms are so deep in their meanings and strong in their sensivity that one can only wonder...

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Angel's lyre 14 June 2009

GOOD! It's awful to lose the person whom you love so much. may nobody experience such trials!

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Smiley Hooker 02 June 2009

a very touching poem. keep your faith, dear. well-written and well-expressed emotion! 10-)

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Deborah Cromer

Deborah Cromer

Portland, Oregon
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