Hidden Joy Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Hidden Joy

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“Art is artificial” the sentence read
I thought over words and felt dead
It took away all my energy
I felt self disgrace and pity

I was writing all along
Whether it was right or wring
I used to feed stuff to readers
Sometimes acting as offenders

“Was it complete lie? ’
Why truth I did not try?
Was it merely playing with sentiments?
This single sentence has made me to resent

My face delights with shine
When someone comment “fine”
Now it sends shiver
Real feeling inside with fear

But there is hidden joy
It makes me completely to enjoy
If my artificial words are taken seriously
I must write for them continuously

Yes truth is naked
It can not be faked
“Death can not experienced”
But words can make us as if glanced

We know that life is full of illusion
Sometimes we go on with confusion
Yet interest to live with dual role remains intact
This is ironically a true thing and fact too

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 October 2013

“Art is artificial” the sentence read I thought over words and felt dead

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 October 2013

Lucette Bailliet Hasmukh Mehta Thank you so much, Love it, that's great! Look at the words art is artificial Artificial contains the word art! Art is work, ie transformation Ie something not natural. Art and beauty are therefore different. 13 minutes ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 October 2013

Peach I don't feel that art is artificial. It's a natural expression of emotion. As a writer or poet, the words that flow from your mind are tangible and very much a real stream of thoughts and emotion. Ah but the best art is usually misunderstood and under appreciated.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 October 2013

Very good. Rich Reitz18 minutes ago Don't stop writing! Comment +1 Ironically a true thing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 October 2013

Muhammad Khalid Khan19 minutes ago Good Comment +1 ok

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 October 2013

Robyn Hunter17 minutes ago ok

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