His Lovely Lady Poem by Sandra Martyres
His Lovely Lady
Dark almond shaped eyes
Delicately shaped eye brows
Long brown eye lashes
A flawless skin
and her perfect face
She carries herself
with enormous grace
He is indeed obsessed
with his beauteous love
Each time she passes him
He stares back at her
in sheer agony
He wants to hold her in his arms
Reassure her that with him
She has nothing to fear
As he will always remain beside her
To love, protect and guard her
But he have been warned
That the slightest hint
of any advances
Would absolutely
ruin his chances
To win her over he needs
to wait patiently
Until she decides
to reach out to him
But inspite of her
seemingly indifferent nature
He still craves this beauteous creature
So will someone tell his lovely lady,
That her silence is killing him
poor chap...interesting write here sandra...a natural style of your own..the poem flows well...10
'He still craves this beauteous creature So will someone tell his lovely lady, That her silence is killing him' Lovely and lovely, 10
He still craves this beauteous creature So will someone tell his lovely lady, That her silence is killing him.......... despite all the praise, the silence puzzles.. oh what a beautiful write. well cone. i have reprhrased line as suggested by you.
Knowing that she is indifferent and silent why waste your time going behind her...instead straight at her face some day just propose to bring the issue to an end...good write
Vow! Gorgeous, attractive, deadly! Does she have a name? Pen in hand you turn into a Magician creating a magic which is amazing, beautiful, attractive. I'm feeling dizzy, my mind is still spinning. after the first part.....Not voting as 10 is not enough for this brilliance.
Romantic, vivid and compelling. Perhaps, as Karin suggests, there will be a sequel.10, of course. Warm regards, Sandra
Success goes to those who dare... a good descriptive write, Sandra...well formatted lines conveying your story there...10
Brilliant images jump form the page here Sandra...excellent piece...Fi 10+++
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I would like to translate this poem
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5/14/2024 7:37:46 AM # 1.0.0.1119
wowwwwwwww lovely poem Sandra, but after all that if she turns around with a NO then what happens to him -10 anjali