Hold Me If I Fall Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Hold Me If I Fall

Rating: 5.0


You have written less
But straight on face
Forced me to think
But I am ready to sink

It is not kiss
That I miss
But your nature
For which I am sure

You are real
As I feel
And make a deal
And dare to steal

Not in song
Even I go wrong
Bring me on right course
You have that mission of course

I shall stay with you and commit
With smile on face and greet
Will you be my fair lady forever?
To say it yes and part with never

Holding a hand will not do
You got to be sincere and true
As I shall be ready to pass through
And try all the means to woo

Hold me if I fall
Respond me if I call
As I shall never be same again
Under your magical spell to remain

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 February 2013

Seen by 3 Wyndlyn Fernando and Faruk Ahmed like this. Wyndlyn Fernando i think you're in love, mr.Hasmukh! hahaha... let me break the magic spell so you won't commit a sin, from your wife& the CREATOR. 3 hours ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 February 2013

Seen by 4 Laura Grillo Laveglia likes this. Laura Grillo Laveglia well written as usual! 2 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 February 2013

Floy Dy Ra, Malaya Roses and Roma Misra like this. Heather Burns love this. nice write 4 hours ago · Unlike · 1 Floy Dy Ra again you let your heart speak & your speech could be also a woman´s preach 2 hours ago · Edited · Unlike · 1 Floy Dy Ra not only to make a silly rhyme - I mean it - what my intuitive power told me without any slime - sometimes i wish women would treat themselves like fellow men - have a pal at their side - like a fair lady forever and at night - or to stay not without umbrella when love crashes bright about an hour ago · Edited · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 February 2013

Opal Ingram likes this. Opal Ingram lovely write 15 minutes ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 February 2013

You have written less But straight on face

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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