Holding Pattern Poem by Aqua Flower

Holding Pattern

Rating: 4.8


stuck up in this holding pattern
cannot start anew
want to take a trip to Saturn
Earth will never do
days and days go by
disouragement seeps through
obstacles piled high
the rainbows seem so few
stuck up in this holding pattern
only time will tell
if I'll ever have come true
that wish from the wishing well

copyright @ Aqua Flower

Sunday, September 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: defeat,wish
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarah Persson 23 September 2018

Lovely poem Aqua Flower. I hope your wish comes true

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Rajnish Manga 23 September 2018

Situations are not always friendly. Fingers remain crossed. Possibilities galore. Thanks. only time will tell if I'll ever have come true that wish from the wishing well

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Rebecca Navarre 24 September 2018

Filled with such beauty, heart and dreams! .. That are ever so moving! .. May all your wishes come true! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Akhtar Jawad 24 September 2018

Life needs encouragement, nature encourages us in many ways.

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Carl Roussell 23 September 2018

May the wishing well be deep and true for you. A 10.

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Aqua Flower 23 September 2018

Thank you my dear friend. I am always hopeful. :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 September 2018

Discouragement provokes thought and gives pain but when we have positive perspectives we get back love and win life with due encouragement. An excellent poem is well penned...10

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Aqua Flower 23 September 2018

Thank you Kumarmani for reading and yes obstacles bring discouragement but postive outlook helps one get back on track. You always have wise words.

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Anil Kumar Panda 23 September 2018

A very nice poem with emotion spilling thick. Loved it. Thanks for sharing.

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Aqua Flower 23 September 2018

Glad you loved it and thank you fo viisiting this poem and commenting!

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