Hopeless Poem by Sarah Ibrahim

Hopeless

Rating: 5.0


Life's Line
One stream
No choices
Even if you scream

Living your life
The way it's written
One Mistake
Won't be forgiven

Hopeless tears fill the floor
You drown in Sadness
Losing breath behind doors
Sealed with Darkness

Broken wings of old dreams
Fill the empty corners
Ashes of burned flames
Following coldness orders

Singing Life's song
Singing all alone
While your once lively heart
Turns into black Stone

Sarah Ibrahim ©

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 23 October 2008

Do we have to say goodbye when all we have got is each other heart? ? ? ? The flow of this piece is like your rhythm of 'inviting soul'.

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Yasser Koor 05 October 2008

that is true. we have no choices and nothing to do when we have no hope. nice poem well-done

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Kesav Easwaran 15 June 2008

a poem sad in tone...good well meaning streaming lines...well done sarah! *10*

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 14 June 2008

profound, considering the eternity life is not that dark

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