I'm so cold
I'm so cold
nothing to put on
no one to embrace
not a hand to hold.
I'm so cold
I'm so cold
surrounded by distant eyes
all hopes are encased
in sculptures of ice.
I'm so cold
I'm so cold
sun has gone
we all freeze, where's the heat
Warm love and beauty.. are you on hold?
Comments transferred from PF xHow well I understand you! I join LadyLotus74's appeal - don't give up! 3 Jun 2011 by rarebird xWell expressed poem. Enjoyed 3 Jun 2011 by Ravi Sathasivam xa very emotional piece, you've captured the emptiness and the loneliness, and loss so well in your words. A most Potent and effective write. tfs 3 Jun 2011 by Night Owl | Reply xIs this an eloquent literary approach to address the Global Warming issue, per chance? ! lol! I'll tell ya' this fer' shur'Elana...Ther' ain't no srands of ice on these threadings of poetic splendor, young lady! FjR 3 Jun 2011 by Frank James Ryan, Jr. / FjR | Reply xA well expressed of desire, or maybe the other way the hypothermia, that you need to be comforted. But the need you implied at the end serve the metaphor of this poem. Good intriguing piece. 3 Jun 2011 by Ency Bearis | Reply xWell dear friends it was meant to warm other hearts more then mine and it seems it does, thank you so much for your prompt response I will get burned by so much warmth or maybe I will become a sun, Ooops! ! I really love all of you, thank you! ! Never seen so much kindness at once only for a few humble words. (Who says the world is bad?) 3 Jun 2011 by Elena S(*_*) picture of Sandra Martyres xAn emotional write Elena...very well expressed...Indeed may you always feel the warmth of your friends 3 Jun 2011 by Sandra Martyres xI'm so sad for you and all who feel this way... we are right there with our hearts beating with yours... a hug to warm you 3 Jun 2011 by eleanor prince
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
All hopes are encased in sculptures of ice Amazing conceptualization. Thanks for sharing.