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*Snow, it's not your time to go, please stay! !

It's winter, yet I feel first signs of spring
seen the snow melting, heard the birds sing
so happy were spreading their wings!
I smiled; but deep
Inside my heart
Comes bleeding one more crack;
My heart is breaking as I know
there is not long to go
for us to fly on ski no more
nor skate nor even watch
the dancing falling snow!
Soon in no more than a few years
we will have raining the whole winter
I so much fear
The drops of rain?
Tears and only a tear flake!
of our most sorowful pain!
It seem we do not want to understand
And never stop to make, stock or gain
Imported food, tobacco, rare drinks
cute cup, gush, so pink! A table plate,
look, all comes really cheap! ?
Then the big staff, expensive ones
the latest car, new game, blue ray
whole range of digi smart, new new house
new roads or railroad cutting the mountains
companies factories eating clean air,
I could continue till tomorrow but you may
stop me and say: -
tomorrow always comes
you'll never go away!
Right! And so the the global warming
forever it will stay
if we continue to play their games.
Whose game? How could I know, lol
No one would say..
But doesn't matter anyway
let's only stop the playing.
And try to save, starting with
being careful for what I pay.

I'll raise my water cup
For me, for Us,
for better than the worse,
Let's rise!
Noroc!

Noroc! - in romanian tongue it means cheers and good luck!

Submitted: Thursday, February 17, 2011
Edited: Friday, February 03, 2012


Comments about this poem (*Snow, it's not your time to go, please stay! ! by Elena Sandu )

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  • Valsa George (7/11/2012 10:34:00 PM)

    The rotating seasons have their own charm. But this cyclic pattern may be violently disrupted if global warming progresses at this rate. This is a warning to all of us who pollute Mother Earth for immediate gains. Nice write!

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  • Khalid Jassim (5/11/2012 2:41:00 AM)

    I smiled; but deep
    Inside my heart
    Comes bleeding one more crack; ....so exquisite words...you make me love poetry and motivate us to read more and more.......thank you poet............

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  • Gordon Tseng (2/21/2012 10:49:00 PM)

    Good works! Sharing my songs about this with you:

    People Have a Little Earth
    www.gordonsgodown.bandcamp.com/track/people-have-a-little-earth
    When Icebergs Are Gone
    www.gordonsgodown.bandcamp.com/track/when-icebergs-are-gone

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  • Rigzin Namgyal (12/2/2011 3:23:00 AM)

    ..nice write..
    ..keep up the good work..

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  • Stefanie Fontker (10/8/2011 8:35:00 PM)

    I love that you're raising awareness of global warming through your poetry. This shows not only your intelligence, but your big heart. Keep spreading the word!

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  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (7/30/2011 6:17:00 PM)

    I like this poem. This year I didnt experience a spring, and summer seemed rather harsh! Global warming is not our friend of anyone. Thought it doesnt necessarily mean whinter would go away, it just means that thigs would become unpredictable and more extreme~

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  • Vinod Kumar (7/30/2011 4:48:00 AM)

    By the influence of the nature we can flew the seven skys... beautiful landscape it really impressd the soul 10+

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  • Malaya Roses (3/31/2011 1:00:00 AM)

    Nature and season will change but the same feeling will not come again unless we act and try our best to save the nature to continue enjoy the nature.
    I love winter and this poem really make me miss my last winter and the feel in that season.
    Keep the nature alive and the nature will give us more chance to enjoy the best.
    Excellent poem.

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  • Elena Sandu (2/18/2011 6:24:00 PM)

    LOL, Next time, I should be more careful what to wish for, today less writing poems, busy to clean the snow, came up to knees, light weight (lucky) beautiful..and deep, hahahaha.The selfish me it's going out to give a bow to a gray sky, appologise and say: - please, we have enough for today.Tomorrow comes another day..

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