How Could I Poem by Baharak Barzin

How Could I



How could i tell i love thee
While words can't tell my old wine taste

How could i show my heart
while it gets shapeless as started beating recklessly, eternally, for thee

How could you see me
while i lost existence as i took thy blink

Monday, February 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love,power
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 25 February 2017

How could i show thee my heart When it lost her shape as started beating recklessly, eternally, for thee How could you see me When i lost existence as i took thy blink - - - - - A sweet and beautiful expression of love.

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Daniel Brick 07 February 2017

This is a very special expression of love but it requires a sympathetic reader. Reading it too fast and not reflecting on it after reading will not release its magic. The speaker is very humble because the beloved looms so large in her imagination. But when their love is reciprocal, she too will loom large in his imagination. The speaker is also very vulnerable having expressed such emotional depth. The response of the beloved must be of the highest sensitivity. This will be the kind of love that unfolds in patience, that will make each day bright and joyous, that trusts in its long-term future. It is extremely idealistic, and not every person is capable of responding to such idealism. This is what Shakespeare meant when he wrote, LET ME NOT TO THE MARRIAGE OF TRUE MINDS ADMIT IMPEDIMENT. Only those whose love is motivated and sustained by a true mind can achieve the kind of marriage your poem celebrates. It's a blessed poem!

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Baharak Barzin 09 February 2017

Daniel Hi Thank you for Spending your Precious Time on my poetry. Well you said the speaker is very humble, that's what we need against this sharp gun (love) and no other alternative, i was and i am vulnerable against love because love is a vital element in our soul and any failure may cause devastation of a human being

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