Suraj Samtani

Rookie - 40 Points (Hong Kong)

Human Not Being - Poem by Suraj Samtani

I bought this body when it was on sale,

Which explains why it is still so stale.



I adopted these organs when they were not yet complete,

Which explains why their energy and mine still cannot meet.



I first experienced a feeling only after it was given a label,

Which explains why I haven't yet felt stable.



I once defined my identity as a cummulation of body, organs and feeling,

Which explains why I am a human without any sense of being.


Comments about Human Not Being by Suraj Samtani

  • Gold Star - 34,112 Points Gajanan Mishra (8/10/2013 10:11:00 AM)

    human without any sense of beings, good write, thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 10, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 27, 2013


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