Humpty Dumpty Rewrite Poem by Ramona Thompson

Humpty Dumpty Rewrite



Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall
Humpty Dumpty had a great fall!

All the king's horses
And all the king's men
Could't put Humpty
Together again

Original Mother Goose song

Below is my reimagined verison of the above

Humped me up against the wall
Them dumped me
When after he humped me
This girl started to fall

All my threatening noises
And all my rants about loser men
Could't do the trick
'Cause after he humped me
He still dumped me
With a cold sneer and a heartbreaking warning
To lose his number and never ever call him again

2009 Ramona Thompson

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barbara Terry 06 May 2009

This is just heartbreaking Ramona. Unfortunately there are men like this in the world. What is it the boys say about the 5 F's? I would just love to stick everyone of them up those boys'.... well anyway, this tells it like it is for some. I am told not all men are like this, but you can't prove it by me. A 10+++++ and thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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