Vizard Dhawan

Hydrocarbon - Poem by Vizard Dhawan

carbon has two allotropes
one is graphite-one is diamond
you are one-you are diamond
shines for me shines by me
having you is a miracle
we are known by the names that are multiple
you and I are bonded by the bond that is triple
I am tetravalent, shows many charasteristics
but only attracted by hydrogens, that is you
sometimes, some heteroatoms disturb us
as I am strong, only bonded by you
our love story will be known for generation
I the carbon you the hydrogen thus forming hydrocarbon

Comments about Hydrocarbon by Vizard Dhawan

  • Rookie - 120 Points Amanda Laurent (12/6/2012 1:56:00 AM)

    A clever, witty write. I like how you spun the idea of chemistry between two people and created the perfect analogy. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 11,686 Points Hazel Durham (12/5/2012 6:11:00 AM)

    So original with great lines, inspired write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Stevie Taite (12/5/2012 12:43:00 AM)

    I like the idea in this one. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Asif Andalib (12/4/2012 11:49:00 AM)

    Interesting poem. I liked it (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,824 Points * Sunprincess * (12/4/2012 8:56:00 AM)

    nice..i think you should be a chemist or a could
    win the nobel peace prize..fabulous write (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 4, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 4, 2012

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