lindsey kidd (muncie, indiana)

life is an experience, love and pain. god only promises a bed of roses in the other world. good one lindsey

When I read this poem, I was struck by how true to my own situation it is.
Though it seems you had your love at one point, while I am the confidant for a guy, I like
but am helping to reach my friend. I’m a sucker, I know.
Anyways, I really enjoyed this poem, and it hurt to read it.

I think it's wonderful that you can express your feelings openly. I've only read;
'I am' the. May i suggest that you leave out the 20 repetitions and list your lines
in the same order. Double spacing the last as,

am the girl...
who u will call when everything has went (gone) wrong

Poetry can be 'eye' candy needing some flavoring for easy reading
Then again, either way, learn as I have, with opinions welcomed
Be the lovely girl, that that you'll never forget as a woman
Happy Writing Lindsey

...louie

this iz so P.I.M.P im gonna use this for my poetry netobook in class.
[good work]

Absolutely poignant! You will enjoy love and life by HIS grace!