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Kavya ...


A Special Relationship


You are my creator
My mentor, my teacher,
You are the guiding force of my life
Who always help me in times of strife.

I know you are and will always be
by my side,
You are someone above God
And these words I shall always abide.

I saw the world with your eyes
With your help was able to differentiate the good and the bad;
Whenever I went wrong, you corrected me and yelled at me
The privilege which every mom has on her lad.

Yes friends, she is none other than my Mom
A wonderful creation of Almighty,
As God cannot be everywhere
She is the replacement of this holy deity.

Mom, you are the epitome of my existence
The reason for my subsistence,
Howsoever I describe you, I know my words will always fall short
As a mom-child relationship is of that special sort!

Submitted: Wednesday, March 13, 2013
Edited: Monday, August 05, 2013

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Thank you Mom for everything. Love you lots.

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  • Shahzia Batool (6/1/2014 1:03:00 PM)

    though we can never reciprocate what moms do for us, can't think even, but the way you have covered all the aspects of her personality is so innocent and superbly rendered poetically...Kavya i love this poem! (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (9/14/2013 5:08:00 PM)

    as long as your creator is your teacher and mentor everything will run smoothly. lovlely write (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (8/30/2013 6:35:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem Kavya...Especially mom..Yes, its such a beautiful relationship that a child always feel safe when near to mom...A sort of happiness....Loved it...

    If you like some funny poem please do read my Happy Learning Dear! , when you are free.. (Report) Reply

  • Chandra Thiagarajan (3/21/2013 2:46:00 AM)

    A mom-child relationship is the best- It is very special indeed! Hope you got your mom to read your mind through the well written poem.She must surely be mighty pleased.May God bless this special relationship! (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (3/13/2013 7:16:00 AM)

    Indeed it is a special relationship which cannot be replaced with any other relationship! You are fortunate to enjoy her love now! We who have lost our mothers still live in the memory of that love! I am sure this dedication must have immensely pleased your mom! ! Enjoyed reading it Kavya! I invite you to read two of my poems on my mother- 'Drop of a Feather' and My Mother (Report) Reply

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