I believed u loved me and i think u beleved it to
but then one day u tore my heart out
and broke it ripped it to pieces
I dont know where the pieces are
they have went everyehere now i jus t have to search
and while im searching my heart will keep bleeding
till i can fix it again
Definitely a good poem. This one really describes your pain. Don't stop writing. Your poems are great.
We need transplant heart to be done :) Joking...it so heartfelt Arielle, good poem with true emotion, keep writing it has great touch :) ...Dont keep bleed soon you will lost blood, and if even you find back your heart but no blood, what your heart use for? ? ? think it deeply...Good luck! _Unwritten Soul
its more often the case.. that one heart loves the other more...it fixes..but i think will always hurt if it was true love... your pain is described and felt...my empathy is yours
A great write. You know how to describe the broken, torn heart well. We've all been there, but you put it into words...fantastic
A great write. You know how to describe the broken, torn heart well. We've all been there, but you put it into words...fantastic
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice message in the poem :)