You have made me cry by means of love
You have made my happy life so tough
I can't find my sea of sorrow's shore
Everything makes me sad makes me bore
You come in my thoughts I can't ignore
Now I can't dance like I danced before
Oh you have made me feel like a whore
I can't believe in love anymore
You have locked my dream's every door
Very touching I must say! I have a few technical issues with it but otherwise it's a good write and good read!
It really made my heart clench.... Great imagery, keep it up :)
Hello Asif Well done...another good poem...thanks for your kind remarks on 'Words on Fire'. Best Ken
a sorrow lines, really sad. hope u believe monce ore in love
Interesting choice of topic. Normally guys don't choose love anymore.
This is a beautiful, sad piece overflowing with emotion and pain. It has a great message and is well written. I like it. And never give up on love. If you can't find it, let it find you. :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is really something Asif Sir. You treat love well I mean love poems. The rhythm is good and their is a good rhymes to the lines as well. Well done. Keep writing