I Can'T Help Me Stop Thinking Of You Poem by Jayakumar Krishnan

I Can'T Help Me Stop Thinking Of You

Rating: 5.0


It was in the dusk of day
I found you on the sea shore
Facing towards the sea
Towards the sun
Where sun is slowly fading away
But still reddish colour prevailing in the horizon
With unusual excitement and susceptibilities,
might be reflecting off your visage

I found the glittering tresses,
With the moves of blondes in the breeze

I know you were waiting for someone
Seems, it be a timeworn waiting
Since you have closed your eyes
though I come across
Wish, if I could be your heart’s desire.
I feel your gazes from behind
when I moved into …
and come close to your temple
with a covert lust,
You haven’t noticed yet.

Again, you’re gasping
The neck, the smell of your skin brought me into
Yes, I am being hallucinated
But I don’t want to take a cold shower still
I wanna enjoy the lust
Without any hitch

You know how much I am sincere
My eyes are telling it to you
But you are still looking away

I wanna ask you if I could touch your face
Wish, if you beg me for it
I wanna let my fingers to roll down your back
and caress your neck and shoulders.

Yes, my lips are whispering
close to your ear to peck on to your neck,
a soft and tender one
I want you to feel, to fulfill my desire unconditionally

Yes, still I am here sitting close to
to feel the warmth of you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 01 July 2011

Excellent poem with a very strong structure. Great sentiments and incredible imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Regards Akmal

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Jayakumar Krishnan

Jayakumar Krishnan

Trivandrum, Kerala, India
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