I Cant Hear You Poem by Rajnish Manga
I Cant Hear You
when i cant hear you
my body is deaf, my soul is frost...
(Original Poem written by puti ira)
We may also write this poem the other way round
as under:
when my body is deaf, my soul is frost...
i cant hear you.
(Please compare both versions and enjoy)
(Original Poem written by Puti)
I find it irritating when someone asks me to repeat what I said. Did they listen properly? I often think they did not. Conversation is an important art.
A great philosophical write. Thought provoking. Cleverly penned succinct write.10++++
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Both the version are excellent. In the first version love has been given priority. As without the lover the body turns stiff remembering him. In the second due to physical deformity may be reason. Enjoyed.
This is an excellent analysis- comparative & comprehensive. Thanks, Anil ji.
Rajnish ji, both interpretations are profound and most philosophical. Brevity and brilliance combine to make this a super write.10+
Thank you, Geeta ji. This was just in the passing that I thought of changing the tenor of the poem.
when i cant hear you my body is deaf, my soul is frost... I think when we fail to listen to the nature our body becomes deaf and our soul is turned in a frost. Both the translations are beautiful.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/30/2024 3:17:36 PM # 1.0.0.1119
The original poem articulates lack of love that causes damages to body and soul of an ardent lover.....while, your version speaks of a deformed person who can hardly avail love! Both the versions have different significance! A brilliant write!