Freespirit Juneja

Rookie - 3 Points (09 Aug 1983 / New Delhi)

I Cant Stop Missing You - Poem by Freespirit Juneja

I can't stop missing you


Sitting in a gloomy place
Enjoying life's aloof phase
I Kindle my soul
With your love's environment
To breathe my only assignment
Every moment your presence renew
I seek far and wide for you
Because I can't stop missing you.

My life's getting dragged
Memories are getting stacked
Wish to listen your loving whispers
Fulfil your desires as your ambassador
Understand your heart's hunches
Despite, bearing life's punches
The cosmos paints a vanishing hue
But I can't stop missing you

Everyday is a haunting raid
Still early to go into Hades
Seems I've lost in the crowd
Light years from your beautiful sound
My heart wants to run and eschew
But nothing can part me from you
As I can't stop missing you

Seems I'm in an endless queue
Perspiring like morning dew
Everyday is a new Halloween
The Ghost is always following
But nothing can part me from you
As My heart just seeks for you
Because I can't stop missing you

Freespirit Juneja


Poet's Notes about The Poem

When someone misses his / her love

Comments about I Cant Stop Missing You by Freespirit Juneja

  • Gold Star - 11,964 Points Lyn Paul (5/19/2014 4:49:00 AM)

    So beautifully written (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,002 Points Leslie Philibert (5/19/2014 3:56:00 AM)

    Like this too. Maybe some work on the rhyme scheme (my POV) might make it even better... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 131 Points Kirti Sharma (5/19/2014 2:48:00 AM)

    Light years far from your beautiful sound
    My heart wants to run and eschew
    But nothing can part me from you......

    beautiful lines..
    nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,335 Points Soumita Sarkar (5/20/2013 12:30:00 AM)

    the pain of missing someone is so genuine..............keep writing! I invite you to go through my poems.Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anush Gupta (5/19/2013 9:34:00 PM)

    I Can't stop praising you. So natural as if like a fountain it spontaneously came out of your heart! Awesome! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sharbaaniranjan Kundu (5/19/2013 10:49:00 AM)

    Too ordinary. Nothing exceptional. Expressions lack clarity. I am sorry, it did not appeal to me. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,597 Points Gajanan Mishra (5/19/2013 1:55:00 AM)

    I can not stop missing you, good poem, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 162 Points Jayne Davies (5/19/2013 1:36:00 AM)

    Great poem! Well done x (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,650 Points Patricia Grantham (3/16/2013 8:02:00 PM)

    I really love this poem. Missing someone that you really love can be heartbreaking.
    Hopefully this kind of love will not take you too far to the point of no return. Good write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,678 Points * Sunprincess * (10/7/2012 12:07:00 AM)

    wow..this is honest and from the heart..beautiful.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shivani Misra (9/26/2012 6:07:00 AM)

    Nice work Shard! ! Missing someone is to find them in your thought every new second :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Hitesh Sharma (6/12/2012 2:50:00 AM)

    U really are missing sum1....and it shows in ur writing..bueno :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 192 Points Rain ... (6/10/2012 9:49:00 AM)

    Seems like I am lost in the crowd
    Light years away is your beautiful sound
    Everyday is a haunting raid
    Still early to go into Hades
    My heart wants to run and eschew
    But nothing can part me from you
    Because I can't stop missing you

    Great....I love this poem a lot.....

    -Rain.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alan Walsh (6/6/2012 6:49:00 PM)

    I find this beautiful and haunting. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,714 Points Neela Nath (5/19/2012 8:05:00 AM)

    I love the words-Every day is a haunting raid.Your diction is associated with a deep feeling.Thus the words get life in your hand. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,805 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (5/19/2012 12:22:00 AM)

    very poignant...very touching...but one has to grow out of obsessions sooner or later... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Serena Taylor (4/23/2012 12:42:00 PM)

    Wow, truelly wonderful (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Heather Wilson (4/20/2012 9:13:00 AM)

    A wonder heartfelt poem, well written. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lizzie O'neill (4/19/2012 12:26:00 PM)

    Wow truly beautiful..very powerful (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Wegen Gebresilasie (4/19/2012 3:30:00 AM)

    Your write very beauitful and touchy indeed, i am a new memeber to this site, but i must say i've read a few of your peoms. I have to say they are astounishing indeed. i very much like the repetition in the end! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 10, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 24, 2015


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