I Compare Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

I Compare

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The poem I miss
In entirety with contents
Its theme
Along with rhythm

I see poetry in you
The words in it are true
I have gone though
And found nothing contrary to prove

I compare you with noble soul
Who responded to my call?
In earnest with feeling
With the purest form to fill

When wind blows with cool breeze
I suddenly have sense to freeze
But your face reminds me to act live
It is His creation and to believe

I feel you as dear
As you are always near
Sincere and honest soul
The essence and sprit of noble

I may not express
Clearly on your face
Yet my eyes may speak
To say how much I am weak

Take me as silent friend
Who may have same trend
To stay near as far as possible
Not to be swayed away or crumble

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 August 2013

The poem I miss In entirety with contents

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Gajanan Mishra 09 August 2013

Take me as silent friend, good write sir, thanks. please read my new poems.

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Patricia Grantham 09 August 2013

A nice poem tribute to members. Poets have a lot in common more than others know. We are a special breed of individuals devoted to expressing ourselves in a way that will inspire, uplift, and encourage others. Please read my poems Poetry in Motion and A Member to Remember. A good write.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 August 2013

Miranda Lynn24 minutes ago Summary says itall

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 August 2013

Good Eric Melton2 minutes ago The speaker is talking to someone that has influenced him. Great tribute. Second to last line is an oxymoron. Comment +1 Nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 August 2013

Ziggy MD4 minutes ago Good stuff. Comment +1 good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 August 2013

Becky Cummins3 minutes ago job

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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