I Don'T Know Poem by Sahar Sahar

I Don'T Know

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Why i think,
that you are mine? ,
you are part of my dreams,
you will be living with me,
i paint on canvas,
a sketch of a life,
which i suppose,
even you are too far,
like a distant star,
why i am walking,
with my absolutely absent mind? ,
i feel that you are standing,
behind my shoulders,
why i am indulged in these,
illusive lies? ,
i don't know.
but i can tell you,
now i am determined,
to be straight forwarded,
you must keep yourself,
away from me,
as far,
as you are.
hallucinated,
and stupefied,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rafique Farooqi 10 May 2010

very intense but nice poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 March 2010

Why i think, that you are mine? , you are part of my dreams, you will be living with me, ....................... Sahar Sahar Sahar you are far far far i can't reach you by car i can hear your voice in ear you can' be seen in year i feel you are here but have no fear i love to bear your feeling so near you are like upcoming star you are, you are, you are listen to what others say you may find the way i rememeber sahar from that day she came to me in the form of ray she was kist opposite the bay what a memorable it was a day

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Dr.subhendu Kar 14 February 2010

as far, as you are. hallucinated, and stupefied, ............ reeks of distance never makes any distinction as the jingles of rain reels alt through musk yet truth reasons to reason by dissipating from illusion true love still assails all clouds cleaving delusion.......................wonderful art of love when portrayed over the canvas of rainbow, love as heretical rills on, art when defrayed being disillusioned, superbly wrought over the hued rung of mellifluous subtlety yet not ot bestirring at epilogue across ingenuity,10+ shar++ sharing i+ngr thanks fo

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