I Fear More Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
I Fear More
"Love at first sight"
I can assert
And emphatically say
You were all the way
Not your presence alone
But your voice and tone
All fascinated with wonder
It compelled me to offer
What makes one to love?
To spend more and believe
I have no answer
But it may be blessings for fewer
I feel you in air
With cold breeze to stare
I feel river flow under feet
I remain eager to greet
I feel sad even with idea of parting
That adds worry and un-comforting
How shall I feel when leave you?
Will it ever be true?
I fear more when sit in corner
You are rushing with hope burner
I find fire with hope
I shall be ever yours and not flop
heartfelt R3N016 minutes ago the rhymes may work against the overall emotion. at times it rhymes and others not, and other times they seem forced. love poems are always heart string tuggers as is this one, however im not sure there is anything to set it apart here. perhaps delve more into what makes this feeling personal or unique. all best
:) Logan Taylor19 minutes ago I really enjoyed the second half of the poem. I had a difficult time connecting to the first part, but seemed to really engage with the second.
Romantic and sweet, you fear more when your eager to give your heart away, love at first sight is risky, but fill us with hope and brings us to the moment, like when you say, i feel river flow under feet, i remain eager to greet, i can relate, i enjoyed reading your poem :) 22 minutes ago by Christina Macias | Reply
Not your voice alone but your sweet tone... lovely expression. Loved this poem.5 stars.
HOPE Steven Kayiira19 minutes ago a great love story Comment +1
nice Rangehbok Lyngwa19 minutes ago Good love poem, simple and true
good Matthew Murphy19 minutes ago interesting Comment +1
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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“Love at first sight” I can assert