I Got Her Poem by V P Mahur

I Got Her

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I walked forward
And then stepped backward
I again stepped forward
But in vain
For I had to retreat
I could not decide
Whether to go up to her
Or to behold her angel look
From a distance
Both the things might
Make her angry
So I thought of
Reaching upto her
By my deep imagination
I sat there
Closed my eyes
Oh! What a surprise!
She was there
Bending on my face
With a fragrant cover of
Her silky hair
I wished to open my eyes
But I could not
For this time
I did not want to miss her

Saturday, March 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Composed on March 30,2014.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pradip Chattopadhyay 30 March 2014

it's oftener with eyes closed can we feel true love. great write, poet.

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Neela Nath Das 29 March 2014

Wow! Fantastic poem on love.Imagination is a part of deep love.When we love someone, we imagine him/her to be with us always! At the same time the sense of loss is present here too.10+++

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V P Mahur

V P Mahur

Siyana (UP) , Bulandshahr, India
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