What You Do Poem by V P Mahur

What You Do



You come into my eyes
Like a dream of angels
You drop from my eyelids
Like the leaves of orchids

You come into my lips
Like the song of chirps
You drop from my rhymes
Like the tyranny’s regimes

You bacon me from the horizon
Like the voice of a baby falcon
You steal me of my deep breath
Like an earthquake’s hot wrath

What you do is beyond limits
Like the sun ray’s gold splits
What you create is out of reach
Like a wise man’s new preach

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Composed on Feb 28,2014
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vivek Tiwari 28 February 2014

Thee most admirable things for this poem 1- Similes 2- Rhymes 3- Imagery These all elements make this a beautiful poem of romanticism. The use of similes recalls Sarojini Naidu's poems.

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Ellen Shaw 28 February 2014

such wonderful imagery, very nice poem

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Shraddha The Poetess 28 February 2014

really a very nice poem................ nice to read............. i also invite u to read mine specially hindi ones

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Geetha Jayakumar 28 February 2014

Beautiful poem. Wonderful flow of words... What you create is out of reach Like a wise man’s new preach Very true said in few lines. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Tabasom Azadee 28 February 2014

it is very good but it is not enough simple for anyone to underestand you

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V P Mahur

V P Mahur

Siyana (UP) , Bulandshahr, India
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