V P Mahur

Rookie - 659 Points (Apr 16,1964 / Siyana (UP) , Bulandshahr, India)

Rain Lovely Rain


Comes from the dark cloud
That makes a noise loud

Rain, cold rain
Tinkles so softly
Like a slow moving train

Rain, happy rain
Enriched the dry land
With many a soft hand

Rain, shining rain
Like the clumps of water pearls
That comes again and again

Rain, heavy rain
Relieving the overpowering heat
Whether a hill or a plain

Rain, dumping rain
Filling the street with water
Turning it into the overflowing drain

Rain, drizzling rain
Making the children cheerful
Forgetting all their pain

Submitted: Saturday, March 15, 2014
Edited: Wednesday, March 19, 2014

Topic of this poem: rain


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Composed on March 15,2014.

Comments about this poem (Rain Lovely Rain by V P Mahur )

  • Gold Star - 7,838 Points Khalida Bano Ali (12/14/2014 1:57:00 AM)

    Rain, drizzling rain
    Making the children cheerful
    Forgetting all their pain
    Lovely lines...............10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,434 Points Akhtar Jawad (8/20/2014 7:27:00 AM)

    A beautyful description of rains. Well wrote Mathur. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,104 Points Valsa George (7/13/2014 4:22:00 AM)

    Now it is raining here (in Kerala...it is the time of monsoon rains) and I enjoyed your sweet poem on the rain! . (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 104 Points Yash Shinde (4/3/2014 11:11:00 AM)

    rain is a really comforting creation of god, you really wrote this piece of thanks well..... (Report) Reply

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