V P Mahur

Freshman - 824 Points (Apr 16,1964 / Siyana (UP) , Bulandshahr, India)

Rain Lovely Rain - Poem by V P Mahur

Comes from the dark cloud
That makes a noise loud

Rain, cold rain
Tinkles so softly
Like a slow moving train

Rain, happy rain
Enriched the dry land
With many a soft hand

Rain, shining rain
Like the clumps of water pearls
That comes again and again

Rain, heavy rain
Relieving the overpowering heat
Whether a hill or a plain

Rain, dumping rain
Filling the street with water
Turning it into the overflowing drain

Rain, drizzling rain
Making the children cheerful
Forgetting all their pain


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Composed on March 15,2014.

Comments about Rain Lovely Rain by V P Mahur

  • Veteran Poet - 1,646 Points Dorothy- A. Holmes (4/21/2015 12:10:00 PM)

    Rain always has a melody! Love your verse!
    Dorothy
    A poet Who Loves To Sing (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,024 Points Khalida Bano Ali (12/14/2014 1:57:00 AM)

    Rain, drizzling rain
    Making the children cheerful
    Forgetting all their pain
    Lovely lines...............10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 32,058 Points Akhtar Jawad (8/20/2014 7:27:00 AM)

    A beautyful description of rains. Well wrote Mathur. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,758 Points Valsa George (7/13/2014 4:22:00 AM)

    Now it is raining here (in Kerala...it is the time of monsoon rains) and I enjoyed your sweet poem on the rain! . (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (4/3/2014 11:11:00 AM)

    rain is a really comforting creation of god, you really wrote this piece of thanks well..... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 15, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 19, 2014


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