Eila Mahima Jaipaul

Rookie (11/26/1971 / New York)

I Got It Bad - Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

I heated my tea twice

went upstairs and came down
only once though...

stood and watched the laundry spin

held the dish-brush, and put it back
yeah, that was a mistake...

smoked a cigarette,
and wrote a poem

you're right
I got it bad.

Comments about I Got It Bad by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

  • Rookie fanniesson - (12/11/2006 10:00:00 AM)

    To say it in such few words
    is beautiful.
    An enjoyable read for me (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 654 Points Ernestine Northover (1/13/2006 3:43:00 PM)

    How about taking a couple of paracetamol tablets, Eila, they are said to calm down any inflammation whether it be in the brain or the braun. They might even help with 'inspiration' you never know. Good thinking. Love Ernestine XXX (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Declan McHenry (1/13/2006 2:28:00 PM)

    An enigmatic write Eila, I'm having to guess at what you've got. Ilike that! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 13, 2006

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