Please spare me your secrets
I am not your best friend
(atleast not yet! !)
‘N I am sorry to break this to you
But …
I am not sure if I would ever be
Not that I don’t like you
But…
You are not my type
Or the other way around
So save your secrets to yourself
I don’t want to hear any, not even a bit
It disturbs me and haunts me
It also ruins my day each and every minute
I know someday you will read this
And hate me like some kind of disease
‘N instead of telling my secrets
I write them down in form of poems
‘N guess what? ? ?
I gain PEACE
‘N I got nothing to lose
So keep your secrets to yourself
No matter whose! ! !
March 15,2006
For those who feel the SaMe WaY
Hey, great poem, I totally feel the same way about that stuff. Keep up the good work. : -) From Marissa.
Nice poem gal. Do you know some secrets could change your life forever? Scaaaaaay :) . Peace.
Great poem.You painted a nice picture.I liked it. Good flow and deep emotions.Very sweet and touching. You go away from your beloved person but you love more than that. Valentin
wow.! this one beautiful, lovely poem that i can relate to very well. keep up! lov, jojo
I'm not sure it is unique Koni, I'm not sure it's where I stand either! I think there some things I'd rather not know but I guess you can't be that picky if a friend wants to confide in you! Suppose it depends on their motives for telling you! ? Anyway great poem! Moyaxx
Hi, I finally got round to reading this, sorry. And as much as I like the language and the style, I can't say I like the point it makes. It does come across as quite sharp and callous in parts, not very warming at all. I admire it's bluntness to a point, but I like to feel people can tell me their secrets if they're my friend or not. I don't look on it as a bad thing. A unique standpoint you have, I think. Dan x
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a grand declaration of self and the space self needs to survive but perhaps there are no secrets every face open a fine poem