Shalom Freedman

Bronze Star - 2,312 Points (Troy New York)

I Have Become An Internet Mind - Poem by Shalom Freedman

I grow impatient with myself
I can no longer write long works
I must move and finish fast
So that I can jump to the next thing

I have the mind in my work
Of a person on the Internet
I click from one work to another
I am always searching for something else

I have lost my patience
I have lost my ability to truly sit and work
I have become a creature of my Age

My mind is an endless racing for something else
An eager greedy lustful hurrying to consume or make
The next item

I am reduced to something very small
And soon this little poem too will be gone.


Comments about I Have Become An Internet Mind by Shalom Freedman

  • Rookie - 45 Points Colleen Courtney (5/23/2014 1:07:00 PM)

    Wow! Very true this poem you've penned! We live in a rush rush world nowadays and I find it so incredibly sad that so many know not the pleasure of long lazy days of doing whatever the heart desires! Well written piece! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 22, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, May 23, 2014


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