I Live My Life Lost Poem by Kadence Luneman

I Live My Life Lost



I live my life lost
Floating out to sea
No tether to the shore
I try to live once more
But it wont let me be
Until I pay its cost

Saturday, May 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,lives,lost
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 17 May 2015

This poem is different from the others I've read, in no particular order. because the speaker is revealing passivity in her image of the untethered boat. The speaker is making no effort to save her/himself. It's almost as if the poem is like a secular prayer, hoping against hope someone will intervene. But the speaker's passivity could be off-putting. But this just a vignette. The poem would have to be longer to give us a sense of further possibilities.

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Zubiya Surti 16 May 2015

Nice share...like your poem

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