Do you want me? Yes.
Did you hope for one day that i would be yours? Yes.
I already am.
Do you care that i told you i belong to you? No.
Everything i said before, i ment it, did you? Sometimes.
For everything i gave you, i wish i could give you more.
I will give you my soul. You can take it.
You can have my heart, but please dont break it.
Do you want to break it i ask? No.
Did you? Yes.
Even if you dont want me back,
Or if i cant come back,
You can have me.
I'll give you everything.
This is a very great poem. I think a way to improve it would be when you ask a question, you shouldnt have the answer right there, maybe give an example of why it's yes or no. Because it makes the reader think less if you give a straight answer like yes or no. But you are very talented, continue to write, you will only get better! ! :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very nice.Love can happen to anyone, at any time.Liked it.