When the world was awake
in awe of the dazzling light
showered by your resplendent face,
I was slumbering in a corner
amidst the darkness of ignorance.
Filled with voidness, now,
have all my life to rue,
love could have blossomed,
but instead, it flew.
Smiling at my ill fate,
I feel I didn't deserve you
And that must be the reason why,
I lost you.
the lost would be found too....an amasing low tone there bringing out the emotional failiure
sometimes life's lessons come by in a harsh manner but so much to learn from them..nothing is lost...
a lovely piece, my dear..try not to lost her again. because you are more than worthy. Hugs, Meggie
nice style and thoughts... sad yet so lovely expressed love and despair in most touching thoughts.. 10++ Lovelots, Maia
Vaibhav jii, May god bless you. Do run your pen and use more your brain there are so many longing to read more and more from you.
lovely poem vaibhav! love will surely come your way, like a wave in the heart.best wishes. ritty
Perhaps you lost your love because you didn't realize, but perhaps you will find another just as beautiful. I particularly liked the rhyming couplet a the end of the last two stanzas. Great poem. 10 Karin Anderson
Nothing is ever lost until you lose Hope. Learn to grow wings then my dear friend!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Touching poem. I feel this is the right tone to be used for broken-heart poetry. Very well composed.