I Love You, Dear Poem by alex andreev

I Love You, Dear

Rating: 4.9


If you will remember my eyes

Light will be with your desire.
Oh my god, how many guys
Vacate your soul to get a fire.
Ease my life, oh baby, ease,

You don't leave me this day
Oh, just be with me, i ask you, please...
Umbrages? .. Let them to get away.

Don't forget about your lad,
Exhale your negative feeling,
And remember, I'm not bad...
Regard is only love's dealing

(The first letters of lines on a vertical mean ''I love you dear'')

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 15 June 2009

You don't leave me this day Oh, just be with me, i ask you, please... Umbrages? .. Let them to get away................ love hates umbrage being deeper all reeks melts away......most passionate and ingenious by imagery, well penned, thanks for sharing

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And remember, I'm not bad....... this expresses ur true love dear...... good write

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Prakash Mehra 07 December 2009

I loved your composition. Nice work.

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Alandra Moreira 14 July 2009

CREATIVE TOO! ! ! ! great job! that earns a 10+++ plus plus.. plus!

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Marieta Maglas 19 June 2009

lovely piece well penned....10+

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Emma Adamyan 19 June 2009

i liked this one Alex. its cute, thx :)

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Alison Cassidy 18 June 2009

This acrostic piece reads like the libretto for a blues song. An unusual poem - honest, romantic and all the more interesting for that. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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