I Love You (Meghan) Poem by thomas coltrin

I Love You (Meghan)

Rating: 4.9


I hold your hand
I feel the pain…..
I see your eyes
And all you’ve gained……

I hear your thoughts
I see through you…..
You seem so sad
In all you do……..

I want to take you
I want to hold you…..
You need to trust me
Like I’ve told you……

I hurt you once
And never again……
I'll hold you tighter
Till the end…..

I'll show you how
These things are done….
I'll show you where
il show my care,
I'll show you now
You are the one

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hadyn Rodriguez 10 March 2009

wow thats very touching

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Anjali Sinha 10 June 2009

lovely poem it touchhhhhhhhhhhhhed me a tenner from meeeeeeeeeeeee anjuuuuuuuuuu (do read mine My small little secret)

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Chinedu Dike 05 May 2018

Beautiful love poem well articulated and nicely penned in good rhyme scheme from the heart. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Thomas.

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♥ nikki t ♫ 30 April 2010

tthis is a verry cute poem.. i like it a lot!

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♥ nikki t ♫ 30 April 2010

tthis is a verry cute poem.. i like it a lot!

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Chelsey Akers 13 April 2010

Wow, thats a really good poem :) im glad I read it :)

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Felicity Slaughter 09 April 2010

wow I really enjoyed this! very touching and very deep. keep it up!

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