Sherbanu Molu

Rookie (1st March 1996 / Mombasa, Kenya)

I'M Alone - Poem by Sherbanu Molu

Im alone in the dark,
I don't see a clue or a mark,
It seems like this place is haunted,
And it also feels like whoever comes here is exempted,
I waited for you all alone,
Thinkin' that you'll come without a frown,
For all those times I've waited,
And today also, for a long time I've waited,
Still, I see no sign of you,
But, I can't betray you,
No matter how worse it gets,
I'll wait, even if the sun sets,
I know my love is true,
I know my feelin's are pure,
Hearing eerie noises makes me feel scared,
I thought you cared,
But you don't, coz i see that,
It was here that you sat,
Now, this place is alone,
It is here where I mourn,
Someone's comin near,
Closer and closer, Oh! I fear,
Please come back,
Coz there's nothin' I lack,
I'm sure you'll return one day,
I hope someday...................

Comments about I'M Alone by Sherbanu Molu

  • Rookie - 173 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (11/27/2009 12:05:00 PM)

    Nice poem… ‘eerie’ a very good coinage for the poetic situation…
    Ms. Nivedita

    Cordially invite you read my poems [Why Hack My She ~ in Elite 500] with comments and….
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  • Rookie Erica Johnson (11/24/2009 3:24:00 PM)

    good poem... keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (11/24/2009 10:15:00 AM)

    Well written poem.......... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 192 Points Joseph Poewhit (11/24/2009 8:47:00 AM)

    Captures a feeling of hope. There is always tomorrow (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 24, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, November 24, 2009

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