Neela Nath


I'M Flying Free - Poem by Neela Nath

Let the clouds sway with the wind,
Let there dance storm like Nataraja;
Let me uproot my soul, from its soil.
I cherish to fly from this fever,
From the weary way, of my trodden earth.
I'm a spirit who can't love, hate
Can't stick to my hackneyed soul...
Take me away away from this world,
where hatred has Medusa's head,
And the Dragon's breath...
I smell my dripping blood.
Trust won't search another,
Trust, leaving nothing, no
Bones, ashes, the burnt blood
Nothing...I'm flying free!


Comments about I'M Flying Free by Neela Nath

  • Rookie - 3 Points Shouvik Roy (6/24/2012 8:53:00 PM)

    Thats the spirit...
    Take me away away from this world,
    where hatred has Medusa's head,
    loved these lines.. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Heather Wilson (6/23/2012 1:20:00 PM)

    A very descriptive well written poem, I hope your soul will always fly free Nilakshi (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 70 Points Indira Babbellapati (6/22/2012 11:01:00 AM)

    the soul is eternally free of all shackles... it's an objective witness to all our thoughts, emotions... we think we should set it free but soul is always beyond us! i enjoyed reading the poem and it lightened me so much that i felt myself a floating cloud! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,247 Points Unwritten Soul (6/20/2012 11:33:00 AM)

    First i am sorry Nila, but i dont know what is Nataraja? ? Well this poem play with contras emotion, some dark side but the mission is to be free...well i dont think hate is useful in any condition, and trust is to be doubt....These two, love and trust are the most precious ingredients to prepare a magical potion in working communication and appreciation of relationship....or did i misunderstood the poem....LOL keep writing :) _Unwritten SOul (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,336 Points Valerie Dohren (6/18/2012 2:10:00 PM)

    Great poem about the soul yearning to be fre e - you may like to read mine entitled Great Eagle with a similar theme. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie R.k Das (6/18/2012 6:21:00 AM)

    it is one of your best poems, , thanx (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 18, 2012



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