I'M Shifting In My Place Poem by Janine Alyssa Navarro

I'M Shifting In My Place



Persistent violin strings
Tug on a memory or two
The weather plays along
The leaves tickle my feet
Spots in the sky were saved
For the dusts of my shadow
To call out to all the cities
Pieces of silver and gold
Light up the divorced night
The blanket of love unfolds
I’m shifting in my place

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 07 February 2012

What a nice poem is it! Nice words have been used in the poem. The quality of the poem is in its flow, the texture of the poem is knitted well, the theme is fantastic, a very good image has been created.The another quality of the poem is its mystic music. It is a great poem.I like the poem; I enjoyed it while reading too. I am giving you 100/100..Keep it up. And at last I like to thank you for sharing this superb poem among us.

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