I May Be Called Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
I May Be Called
I had no courage
To put her in cage
To be kept as pet
So decided to let
“I must release her”
From my arm and shoulder
As she deserved full freedom
And missed to be seldom
I am not fit for her role
As she is simple and noble
Knows nothing about real world
I should not act rude and cold
She is still loved
And I too have believed
Yet she needs better choice
I will not be able to fulfill the promises
I had thought previously
With narrow interest in mind really
Now I think I must act
Even if she angrily reacts
I wonder about outcome
But it must be well done
She was loved and must be comfortable
In her future and stay stable
She is happy and unaware
But I have decided to dare
Put words straight on face
And end the mad chase
I may be called stupid
But I must provide lead
She must be offered free space
Love is and must remain delicate phase
superguy3401 minute ago This was good, but know that not all poems have to rhyme, which I think may have made this poem a bit too confined since you had to rhyme with the line above. But I still liked the idea of your poem Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago no it is style. i need to rhy, it flows.
Naidz Ladia and Lucette Bailliet like this. Naidz Ladia i may be called...i saw this in poem hunter....so good to read oldy...hope ur fine 3 hours ago · Like
: -) : -) sukanya dhatrak3 minutes ago Beautiful! Touching piece! Comment +1 a poem of need
v Alan Green 'Guppyman'3 minutes ago the poet tells of all of a love true Comment +1 Good
superguy3401 minute ago This was good, but know that not all poems have to rhyme, which I think may have made this poem a bit too confined since you had to rhyme with the line above. But I still liked the idea of your poem Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago no it is style. i need to rhy, it flows.
Alan Green 'Guppyman'3 minutes ago the poet tells of all of a love true Comment +1 Good
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I had no courage To put her in cage