I Miss You Dear........... Poem by Sebastine Humaemo
I Miss You Dear...........
I...............get only few hours a week to meet you
just..........for a while my eyes admire and adore you
want........ to be with you always
to............share my love and care
say, ........ can I walk to your place where you live
your........ words of love echoes in my ear day and night
my.......... soul wanders alone under dark moon without rest
life........... goes pale, since even a single day we are not united
and......... you know its true...when will that Divine day will be?
I...............need you throughout my life dear
miss....... you much......miss you day and night
you......... keep running in my mind 24*7
always... you do.....hmmm are you not tired?
take........me with you for Iam yours
care........ me and shower me with your fragrance of love
often....... my lips murmur your name in sleep
my........... life moves on because of your love dear
heart........dosn't beat fast too...you know why?
I............... don't like hurting you, as your within it
left.......... alone in the road is what I feel for now
within...... a second my soul will depart, if ever happened to miss
youuuuuuuuuuuuu.............
Wow such a double composition, lateral and horizontal composition...uniquely penned with touching verses...Thanks 10+++
my gosh...my gosh...my gosh.....i dont know how to start my comment ha...very impressive, , , , first, i like the dual interpretitions express here...the meaning of words written horizontally differs in written words vertically...what a very unique composition dear...unique in appearance and unique in thought, idea and meaning..this is an honest decleration, revelation from your honest heart, a very beautiful piece whch gives the author an idea about his peronality...for me, the author is displaying his sincerity, honesty., a loving, a kind hearted, etcetera etcetera....but naughtiness is well presented, hehehhehe where? in the form of the vertical words...very unique dear sweety tine, , , well, am expecting another one with diagonal style ha...am not kiddin but i found this poem hundred times nice, , , my gosh...allow me to share my warmth congratulations to this piece...i love this poem, , , i like this most....bleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...
well written and constructed in a rhythmic way. I put 10++++ for your beautiful writing.
wow..........great construction.........pleasing to the eyes n nice to read.........well penned
Oh God, Sebastine this is really good.....just expressive in itself in its real feel that exist within a true heart -filled with utmost tenderness.......the format or texture is simply great..presention of the beautiful thought is extremelly gud..now wht happen Sebastine the modlues are proving beautiful and angelic..quite romantic in nature.............Winnie 10+++++endless! ! ! .
wow... very impressive.. great love is speaking here....very poetic words are so alive....very Sebastine..lol your dual composition added spices to it...added more passion... all the lines are so enchanting, captivating, touching like the beauty of the moonlight that never rest... a great love revealed...a great longing exposed.... revelation of the feeling from deep within your heart....love can wait they said..and your reward is waiting...to have her....and spend your whole life with her..... and i would love to suggest... laminate this poem of your, give it to her....owssssss....smile 10++++so sweet....
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5/14/2024 12:31:37 AM # 1.0.0.1119
hmmm, this is soo sweeet, my dear.Your flow of words are just lovely. hugs, meggie