I Missed A Poet (Timing Is Everything) Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

I Missed A Poet (Timing Is Everything)

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I sit in awe of you
reading snowflakes
like life lessons
falling from the sky

I read your sensuality
quietly rising
like the mist from my earl
secret desires hidden in the fog

I am missing
day consuming chats laced with
late afternoon waterfalls
and not so hidden innuendos

it seems touching
a soul across
a sea of light and fish and words
takes both time and effort

and who really has that to give?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Todd Jones 20 December 2005

That's how you start a poem! ! ! very well done would love to hear some of your comments on my stuff....its nice to see some good work posted on here.

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***** ********* 20 December 2005

This poem of yours flows like a meadering summer stream in the depth of winter Eila. Thanks for sharing it,10 from smiling, but tiredTai

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